Tuesday, February 25, 2014

How I Wished- Fiction 55

55 On Friday 2014 -2

“You look beautiful”, I whispered looking at her red bridal sari and her pretty, glowing face.

She should have been happy but the unshed tears told me another story.  

She hadn’t forgotten me, had she?

I raised my hands to touch her but it went straight through her.

How I wished that I was alive!

18 comments:

  1. wooooo! interesting .

    I too wish he was alive to marry her.

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  2. Beautifully sensitive and truly vibrant post.
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  3. Ohhhh....

    Poignant and beautiful!

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  4. I loved the twist in this one. Great story! ♥

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  5. Ohhh!! that was such a twist and so heart touching!

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  6. This is called ghost writing.
    Excellent piece. :)

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  7. Oh dear ghost.. I pity you from the bottom of my heart..Loved it Prasanna...

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  8. I'm left wondering who is the ghost: the narrator or the other one?

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