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“Look
ma, my friend Kirti gave this to me”, said my 7-year old daughter, as she
showed me the small, dirty rag doll that she held closely, while standing near
the threshold of our home and waving to her friend.
My
heart raced as I peered outside but I could not see anyone, yet my daughter
kept waving to her friend.
I
remembered a story that I had read recently, in which an imaginary friend of a
young girl turns out to be a demonic spirit, hell bent on destroying the entire
family of her friend.
“Is
Kirti just an imaginary play friend or someone else?” my mind pondered in the
night, as I tossed and turned in the bed and observed the shadows dancing
uncannily on the walls of our home.
The
next morning when the doorbell rang and I opened the front door, I saw a young
girl, around my daughter’s age, smiling and saying, “Hi aunty I am Kirti, from the
neighboring house, and my mom just sent me over to borrow a bowl of sugar”.
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Oh thank God!
ReplyDeleteLovely take on the prompt! :)
Ha haa :D Good one!
ReplyDeleteRegards,
Sindhu
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That was a good one
ReplyDeleteThanks Tina :)
DeleteGood story Prasanna.
ReplyDeleteThanks Janaki :)
Deletehahaha chalo bach gaye! :D
ReplyDeleteHaan bach gaye :P
Deleteohh that must have scared the hell out of the mother :) nice write
ReplyDeleteOh Yes, it definitely did :)
Deletehahah good one! Thank God it was no spirit!
ReplyDeleteYeah although I love ghost stories ;)
DeleteWow! Nice! Concluding things too soon brings worry...dats d true demon shortening our lives!:-)
ReplyDeleteYeah and jumping to conclusions :)
DeleteHaha..I thought you were writing paranormal stuff... Bowl of sugar?!! haven't we given enough?!! :P
ReplyDeleteGood one..
Hehe, neighbors you know!
DeleteGreat story, Prasanna! So relieved :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anita :)
DeleteMe too, felt quite relieved!
ReplyDeleteAfter all what is a bowl of sugar when compared to demonic spirits!!!
Thanks Indrani :)
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