Tuesday, February 25, 2014

How I Wished- Fiction 55

55 On Friday 2014 -2
Prompt- How I Wished

“You look beautiful”, I whispered looking at her red bridal sari and her pretty, glowing face.

She should have been happy but the unshed tears told me another story.  

She hadn’t forgotten me, had she?

I raised my hands to touch her but it went straight through her.

How I wished that I was alive!
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18 comments:

  1. kalpana solsiFebruary 25, 2014 at 9:53 PM

    wooooo! interesting .

    I too wish he was alive to marry her.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2014 at 2:53 PM

    Beautifully sensitive and truly vibrant post.
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  3. SoumyaFebruary 26, 2014 at 6:46 PM

    Ohhhh....

    Poignant and beautiful!

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  4. UnknownFebruary 26, 2014 at 11:59 PM

    I loved the twist in this one. Great story! ♥

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  5. Michelle StanleyFebruary 27, 2014 at 12:58 AM

    A very touching and sad love story.

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  6. NabanitaFebruary 27, 2014 at 3:59 PM

    Ohhh!! that was such a twist and so heart touching!

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  7. IndraniFebruary 28, 2014 at 10:48 AM

    This is called ghost writing.
    Excellent piece. :)

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  8. Preethi VenugopalaFebruary 28, 2014 at 11:48 AM

    Oh dear ghost.. I pity you from the bottom of my heart..Loved it Prasanna...

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  9. Red HandedFebruary 28, 2014 at 12:15 PM

    damn!!!!

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  10. Tomichan MatheikalFebruary 28, 2014 at 10:15 PM

    I'm left wondering who is the ghost: the narrator or the other one?

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