Sunday, January 19, 2014

Little Did She Know- 55 Fiction







Prompt:

Little did she know



She was intelligent, successful and gorgeous.

Her eyes full of hope and a bright future ahead, 

She dreamt of a long and content life beside the man she loved.

But little did she know that she was just a character in my novel and she would die even before the end of the first chapter.

This post if written for Write Tribe's 55 words on Friday Prompt

31 comments:

  1. Wow! This is a brilliant 55er!! Such a novel plot!! Cool :)

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  2. Ohhh that is creative! I broke into a smile reading it... :)

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  3. very well written. She is just a character and a puppet in the hands of a novelist.

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  4. Oh my God that was quite a twist! :) Awesome Prasanna

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  5. Ah, it is so sad.Her dreams will be shattered. Well written.

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    1. Hehe Thanks :) It's hard to restrict oneself in 55 words :)

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  7. Brilliant and amazingly awesome. Three cheers:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/01/17/55-on-friday-little-did-she-know

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  8. That was brilliant. Been visiting here after a long time.. it has got in me some inspiration now...

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  9. Awww, please don't kill her soon.. she seems like such a promising character!!

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  10. So bad of you..You killed her in the first chapter..Bad!! :)

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    1. Hehe, Preethi, I'm in the mood for some thrillers. Feb is almost here and I know we are going to be deluged by mushy-slushy love stories :)

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  11. Sheer brilliance. The twist made me smile despite the tragic ending :) Well written!

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  12. Ahh how powerful the write feels in this!!
    brilliant!

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  13. awesome take on the prompt...very novel !!!

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  14. That is disappointing!
    Great write up.

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  15. Right, so you are the writer and hence you have the power to go and kill anybody, isn't it Prasanna.. Tch.. Tch.. So very mean of you ;) ;) :P

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  16. that was really a good one, Prasanna :)

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