Sunday, January 19, 2014

Little Did She Know- 55 Fiction







Prompt:

Little did she know



She was intelligent, successful and gorgeous.

Her eyes full of hope and a bright future ahead, 

She dreamt of a long and content life beside the man she loved.

But little did she know that she was just a character in my novel and she would die even before the end of the first chapter.

This post if written for Write Tribe's 55 words on Friday Prompt
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31 comments:

  1. Shilpa GargJanuary 19, 2014 at 4:53 PM

    Wow! This is a brilliant 55er!! Such a novel plot!! Cool :)

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  2. SeetaJanuary 19, 2014 at 5:12 PM

    Ohhh that is creative! I broke into a smile reading it... :)

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  3. kalpana solsiJanuary 19, 2014 at 5:39 PM

    very well written. She is just a character and a puppet in the hands of a novelist.

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  4. NabanitaJanuary 19, 2014 at 5:42 PM

    Oh my God that was quite a twist! :) Awesome Prasanna

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  5. UnknownJanuary 19, 2014 at 7:04 PM

    Ah, it is so sad.Her dreams will be shattered. Well written.

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  6. SoumyaJanuary 20, 2014 at 12:43 PM

    Wow madam that was awesome :)

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    1. Prasanna RaoJanuary 20, 2014 at 2:07 PM

      Hehe Thanks :) It's hard to restrict oneself in 55 words :)

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  7. Vishal BheerooJanuary 20, 2014 at 5:17 PM

    Brilliant and amazingly awesome. Three cheers:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/01/17/55-on-friday-little-did-she-know

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  8. ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ AshwiniJanuary 21, 2014 at 11:17 AM

    That was brilliant. Been visiting here after a long time.. it has got in me some inspiration now...

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  9. CanaryJanuary 21, 2014 at 11:51 AM

    Awww, please don't kill her soon.. she seems like such a promising character!!

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  10. Preethi VenugopalaJanuary 21, 2014 at 1:11 PM

    So bad of you..You killed her in the first chapter..Bad!! :)

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    1. Prasanna RaoJanuary 21, 2014 at 1:23 PM

      Hehe, Preethi, I'm in the mood for some thrillers. Feb is almost here and I know we are going to be deluged by mushy-slushy love stories :)

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  11. UnknownJanuary 21, 2014 at 7:11 PM

    Sheer brilliance. The twist made me smile despite the tragic ending :) Well written!

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  12. Aayesha S HakimJanuary 21, 2014 at 8:17 PM

    wow!
    such a nice 55 er!
    :)

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  13. Red HandedJanuary 21, 2014 at 10:05 PM

    Ahh how powerful the write feels in this!!
    brilliant!

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  14. Karan ShahJanuary 22, 2014 at 3:41 PM

    awesome take on the prompt...very novel !!!

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  15. Bushra MuzaffarJanuary 22, 2014 at 4:10 PM

    Very well crafted!

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  16. IndraniJanuary 22, 2014 at 6:05 PM

    That is disappointing!
    Great write up.

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  17. Jyotsna BhatiaJanuary 23, 2014 at 12:34 AM

    Right, so you are the writer and hence you have the power to go and kill anybody, isn't it Prasanna.. Tch.. Tch.. So very mean of you ;) ;) :P

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  18. RatJanuary 23, 2014 at 8:28 PM

    that was really a good one, Prasanna :)

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