It
was Friday the 13th, but Jaya didn’t believe in these ridiculous
superstitions. She was happy, doing the thing that she did best-cooking. And
she was preparing her favorite dish today, Alu-Gobi. Her comfort food! She had
come back early from work because they were predictions of heavy thunderstorms
and rain. Jaya picked up the local newspaper as she cooked.
“Dangerous
psychopath’s incredible escape from maximum security prison”. A small shiver
went down her spine as she read with bated breath that the man convicted
of killing his family, including his aged parents, his wife and two children,
had miraculously escaped from his cell where he was serving his life sentence. The
media had nicknamed him as The Ripper because of the violent and gruesome
nature of his attack.
Jaya
wondered what would happen if the killer came at her doorstep and felt a little
jittery. She blamed it on the stormy night-the deafening thunder, the heavy
downpour and today’s date had spooked her-that’s all. That was when she heard
the knock on her door…
C…R…E…A…K…
Ashwin
stopped typing on his laptop and whirled around in his chair with a frown on
his face as the door to his study opened with a squeaking noise. He was sure
that he had locked the door before starting his work. How had the door opened?
He looked back at the incomplete sentence on his laptop. He was so engrossed in
writing Jaya’s story that he couldn’t think clearly whether he had latched the
door. Maybe he had just imagined that he had done it.
Ashwin
thought it better to shut the door. Just like in Jaya’s story, the night
outside was going to be a stormy one and a fierce wind was howling through the
windows. He walked quickly and closed the door firmly, latching the bolt. He
walked towards the windows to stare at the gloomy night outside. A sudden chill
in the room made the hairs on back of his neck stand on end. He could feel his
skin break out in goosebumps. He knew that there was something terribly evil in
the room…
“Behind you, you idiot…”
Just
as Ashwin whirled around, the knife slashed in his face and there was a
terrifying scream of agony.
Jasmine
paused the movie. “What a useless horror writer! Doesn’t he know that the
killer always attacks when you have your back turned towards the door or window.”
Jasmine pulled the blanket closer and settled snugly on the sofa. She loved
watching these slasher movies and today had seemed like a perfect day for a
horror movie marathon. Unlike her friends who were scared to watch horror
movies, Jasmine was a horror film junkie. She was addicted to them. Today was Friday
the 13th, and she decided to binge watch all the horror movies in
her collection. Alone! I told you she was not your typical girl who grasped her
boyfriend’s arm in theaters after being coerced to watch slasher movies.
A
slight noise in the kitchen distracted Jasmine’s attention but she didn’t budge
from her cozy perch on the sofa. She lived with 2 other girls and 3 stray cats
from down the road. So midnight snack attacks were common in their house. But
Jasmine, you’d’ve been paralyzed with fear had you known that The Ripper had
broken one of your kitchen windows and was now gazing lovingly at the array of knives on your shelf.
Behind you, Jasmine. You should know better, after all you watch
horror flicks, don’t you?
This post is written for WriteTribe Problogger October 2017 Challenge. The theme for today was Bated Breath. #writebravely #writeproblogger
That was freaky! It's raining in Bangalore and I couldn't help thinking what if? ;)
ReplyDeleteYeah. I'm thinking that there is something in the saying that Friday the 13th is an unlucky date!
DeleteWhoa! Well done. Loved the way you managed the plot within the plot within the plot. :D
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteSuperb! Could visualize the unfolding of each story. Spooky and engrossing.
ReplyDeleteThat's real scary. Well written.
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