“Saru,
come here, the view from here is breathtaking”, called out Anu, from her perch
on one of the slippery rocks.
“Anu,
it’s too dangerous. Please come back”, cried Saru thinking that it was bad idea
to trek to the mountains when the weather was so breezy.
“Oh
don’t be such a spoilsport. Wait, I’ll come there and you can take my hand”,
said Anu as she expertly jumped from one boulder to another.
As
she reached Saru, she took her hand and guided her down to the rocks, much against
the protests of her sister. Saru and Anu were twins. They were also identical
to look but many people felt that Saru was the better looking sister among the
two. Whenever Anu brought this up to tease her sister, Saru would deny it
sharply saying that they were reflections of each other, like looking into a
mirror and seeing their own image.
As
Anu showed the beautiful sunset, Saru sighed and agreed that it was a most
wonderful sight.
“Anu,
I wanted to ask, if you have forgiven me for agreeing to marry Rajiv”, Saru
said as she took Anu’s hands in her own.
“What’s
there to forgive? Rajiv’s proposal had come to me, he and his family had come
to our house to see me and fix my marriage. But if he saw you and fell in love
with you, it’s not really your fault right? I mean you did not deliberately
come in front of him, so that he would fall in love with you? You are prettier
than me Saru”, said Anu, touching her own face as if to feel the acne that
covered her face and had become the bane of her existence.
“I
know that you liked Rajiv, didi*. I should not have accepted his proposal but
mom and dad were indignant that such a good proposal should not go wasted. And
Rajiv is a good guy”, Saru’s voice trailed off as she realized that her eyes
were wet. Ever since she accepted Rajiv’s proposal the guilt of breaking her
sister’s heart was eating at her soul.
“Oh,
come on! Ever since we were born you were the one who got all the attention. I
tried so hard to match up to the expectations you set, but nothing was good
enough. “Oh, how sweetly Saru sings” , “what a good cook Saru is”, “what a
brilliant student Saru is”, “how pretty Saru is”. It’s always been you. But I
never expected you to fall so low. Never mind! Rajiv is mine and he will remain
mine.”
Suddenly
Anu pushed Saru with the back of her palms. As Saru’s body fell over the huge
boulders, she could hear her anguished cries. Anu ran as fast as she could, shouting
for help. Of course she knew that by the time anyone came for help, Saru would
be long dead.
As
Anu lay on her huge bed in the night, she remembered, when they were kids she
and her sister would curl up together in the same bed and talk all through the
night, finally falling asleep during dusk. It had been 15 days since Saru’s
death, and people had accepted Anu’s words about Saru tripping over the
slippery rocks and falling down the steep mountains.
They
tried to console the heartbroken and deeply distressed Anu. But Anu’s soul was
rejoicing. Finally she was free from that fire of jealousy that burnt in her
soul.
As
the cool breeze blew through the windows Anu felt a light touch on her
shoulders and she turned back to look. There, curled up against her was Saru
but her body seemed to be twisted and bloody.
“Anu,
my dear sister, it’s me Saru….”
*didi= 'Sister' in Hindi
I expected that end but it still gave me chills :(
ReplyDeletewell Narrated babe :)
Kudos to u
and I remembered a movie CHARU LATHA . google to know more !
Charu Latha, Ok I am googling it! I am game for any horror movie :)
DeleteU know this is the story of an Mlayalam movie called Geethanjali....
ReplyDeleteNever heard the movie, but will look it up in Google :)
DeleteOh my God! It gave me chills...Jealousy is so destructive no? Beautifully written!
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I am reading the second story with the same title...first was also about sibling jealousy and I said that with right nurturing it gets subsided with age, but i guess all it takes is little fuel to reignite the fire of jealousy.
ReplyDeleteWhoa.... reminds me of Charulatha and Githanjali... brilliant narration!! Watch those movies, you will love it!!
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Written extremely well ! very touching...
ReplyDeleteIt is sad when parents and others make one sibling jealous of another by making unfavourable comparisons.
ReplyDeleteShe got rid of her sister, but the burden of her guilt will follow her in the such scary form....unexpected end
ReplyDeleteso well written (y) absolutely loved d narration.. yeah jealousy can make people do things they never wud hav thought of otherwise!
ReplyDeleteWhat a terrifying story and an even more frightening end! And I read this now, before going to bed! :D Well written, Prasanna!
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Beautifully writtem!!! Wow...! :)
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What an awesome narration..Like others said reminded me of 'GEETANJALI'
ReplyDeleteOh! A tragic and scary end.
ReplyDeleteOhkay, I have goosebumps!!
ReplyDeleteCreepy and very intense. Liked it and my word for J was jealousy too.
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